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"The Longest Journey" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ]
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 Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 30, 2011 03:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
I can't find one freaking complaint about this fic!! You did a kickass job and I could not be more satisfied!! Though some chapters were a bit hard to get through emotion wise...it all came full circle and as dumb as InuYasha was...I am glad even he found happiness. Now I just need a yummy Inu Lord.... SP
 Title: Ten out of Ten, ten thousand times over!
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 21, 2011 00:29 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Wow, Wow, Wow..... you have EVERYTHING covered ...thank you so much I haven't felt such a satisfying fic in a while, this story truly feels complete and that is something that I thank you for I love stories very VERY much and it disheartens me when one is not finished or then ending leaves much to be desired.....Is it possible to give you more then ten stars? If so you deserve them.... defiantly.... everything worked out a better happy ending then disney because you went forward a few years to let us know that everything stayed that way.....Thank YOU!!!!!..........Nyuka
 Title: The longest journey
Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 30, 2010 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is awesome the plot is outstanding I love this pairing your an excellent writer thank you
 Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2009 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it ended why??? it was a great ending though i love your zs they were so cute please keep writing stories, if not for you but for your fans ~~~~~~~ZZZZ~~~~~~ aiyana
 Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2009 04:09 EDT
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such a great ending! i loved this story and i am really glad i gave it a chance. (as you know i was not a fan of this pairing) anyways i'm also glad you experimented but my favorite fic from you is the Fuyu Series ^_^ i love Sess/Kags Pairings...and maybe just maybe you might be thinging of making a little fanfic or oneshot with that pairing? maybe?
 Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 05, 2009 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am truly sad to see this story end it was such and enjoyable read. However as the saying goes all good things come to an end. It truly has been a very amazing read.
 Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: dmsims3 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 05, 2009 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What a great story! You write these stories so well with such great attention to detail! I'm a fan of your Fuyu trilogy and I love this story just as much! It's nice to see authors experiment with different pairings. Will there be any sequels to this story? Great job and I look forward to whatever you write next!
 Reviewed By: reader00- Inari-foxgoddess  On: September 04, 2009 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! What a great chapter!
 Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2009 05:42 EDT
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ugh want to apologize i realize, after posting, my last review was full of typos. Oh and there is a song ..can't remeber who sings it but if I remeber the name right it's "Slow like Honey" your scene with Kag and Sugimi after her trance just kinda made the one line that sticks in my head from that song pop up. Slow like honey heavy with mood....yeah I think that describes the essence of that really well.
 Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2009 05:35 EDT
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Poor Kikyou. I mean seriously in the anime I hater her as much as Naraku, and almost any fic I've read I hater her more and more but this is terrible. Although gotta say Karma is a bitch and you hit the nail on the head with that. And it's really just skin crawlingly creepy at how believeable the characters are. I mean I could easily picture inuyasha standing there with a hand behind his back and just using a casual flick of his hand to torture the incarnation. Oh please tell me Leiko gets a bit of just desserts not just her quiet slink of, with her head held high still full of herself, escape to her estates.
 Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2009 00:19 EDT
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Oh My God! you made Inu evil!!!! an not only that but he will be a full demon too!!! grrrr! that bugged me but besides that its amazing. although i dont like the inuyasha part i still really enjoy this story. its not only original but you really do keep on surprising me. i cant wait to read more!
 Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2009 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The chapters keep getting better, and better!!!! Thank you for the amazingly fast updates!!!! WOW!
 Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2009 04:49 EDT
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Let's see Leiko deal with that. LOL
 Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2009 00:21 EDT
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omg. i'll admit that at 1st i was kinda iffy about the pairing, but u pulled it off wonderfully. i'm hooked on not only this, but ur other stories as well. keep up the good work, & plz try 2 update this one w/ more chapters asap!!
 Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 02, 2009 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Whoop, finally! I love the playfulness of it all, so great. I can't stop reading! Keep up the excellent work ;D
 Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: dmsims3 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 02, 2009 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awww, they're finally mates! Someone really needs to kick Inuyasha's butt! Please keep updating!
 Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 02, 2009 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This continues to be an AMAZING story!!!
 Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 02, 2009 04:49 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have to agree I am feeling sorry for Kikyou and I seriously dislike her character almost always. I also like that you've taken a different pairing. I think the Kag/Inu is old and the Kag/Sess gets old too and honestly Inu just doesn't deserve her. I think you write the characters very well and rather true to form. ~Anxiously awaiting the next chapter
 Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 02, 2009 04:43 EDT
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*scowls at inuyasha* Man I know he can be dense but seriously. Sadly there are too many guys and even girls like that in reality. They only see and hear what they want and don't take into account they area ctually hurting the one the suppossedly love. Great updates will be anxiously awaiting more.
 Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 02, 2009 01:30 EDT
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LOVE it! i swear you just get better and better! Finally Inu Tashio is in the future!! it makes me wonder what will you have him discover? well anyways thanks so much for all of the updates! i love them! you are AMAZING!!
 Reviewed By: Reader00- Inari-foxgoddess  On: September 01, 2009 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! I am still LOVING it! Thank you for so many frequent updates!!
 Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 01, 2009 13:28 EDT
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Wow. I think that sums it all up. I love this story. I am always waiting for new updates.
 Title: Holy Shit!
Reviewed By: luna_spellsprite [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 01, 2009 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Enthralling! Yup... probably the best damn word I can come up with for this piece of work. I've read a few InuT/Kag pairings and I can't say that I've been impressed but this one sure blows them all out of the waters. Your character dynamics are delightful and I'm actually feeling sorry for Kikyo(and considering I truely dislike that character THAT'S saying alot). Everyone usually demands that authors post often... all I ever ask is that you post when you can and keep your standards! Thank you for such a great read!
 Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 31, 2009 22:19 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I'm absolutely enthralled! Such a different twist and the characters are quite vivid. Can't wait until things get heavy!
 Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 31, 2009 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!! Keep it up!
 Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: dmsims3 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 31, 2009 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love the Kagome/InuTaisho pairing! I am already addicted to this story. Great job on the confrontation between Inuyasha and Miroku! I can't wait to read the inevitable confrontation between Sugimi and Inuyasha! I hope we hear a little about Sesshomaru soon. Does he know Sugimi is back and the new Northern Lord yet? Please keep updating!
 Reviewed By: dgnghmd  On: August 31, 2009 09:05 EDT
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loving this story! really loving the frequent updates :) keep it up.
 Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 30, 2009 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Fantastic story! I do not see many Kagome/Inu no Taisho pairings that can pullit off. This is great! I have added it to my favorites! I hope you update soon, as you have been doing. I am eager to read more!
 Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 30, 2009 15:09 EDT
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i am definitly loving this story! i cant wait till tomorrow!! great job!
 Title: Loving it!
Reviewed By: omegawolfempress(offline)  On: August 30, 2009 11:19 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your story. I can't wait to read more. I hope the next chapters come out soon. Great job!
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