| "The Longest Journey" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it ended why??? it was a great ending though i love your zs they were so cute please keep writing stories, if not for you but for your fans ~~~~~~~ZZZZ~~~~~~ aiyana
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 04:09 EDT
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such a great ending! i loved this story and i am really glad i gave it a chance. (as you know i was not a fan of this pairing) anyways i'm also glad you experimented but my favorite fic from you is the Fuyu Series ^_^ i love Sess/Kags Pairings...and maybe just maybe you might be thinging of making a little fanfic or oneshot with that pairing? maybe?
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am truly sad to see this story end it was such and enjoyable read. However as the saying goes all good things come to an end. It truly has been a very amazing read.
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Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: dmsims3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story! You write these stories so well with such great attention to detail! I'm a fan of your Fuyu trilogy and I love this story just as much! It's nice to see authors experiment with different pairings. Will there be any sequels to this story? Great job and I look forward to whatever you write next!
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Reviewed By: reader00- Inari-foxgoddess On: September 04, 2009 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2009 05:42 EDT
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ugh want to apologize i realize, after posting, my last review was full of typos. Oh and there is a song ..can't remeber who sings it but if I remeber the name right it's "Slow like Honey" your scene with Kag and Sugimi after her trance just kinda made the one line that sticks in my head from that song pop up. Slow like honey heavy with mood....yeah I think that describes the essence of that really well.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2009 05:35 EDT
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Poor Kikyou. I mean seriously in the anime I hater her as much as Naraku, and almost any fic I've read I hater her more and more but this is terrible. Although gotta say Karma is a bitch and you hit the nail on the head with that. And it's really just skin crawlingly creepy at how believeable the characters are. I mean I could easily picture inuyasha standing there with a hand behind his back and just using a casual flick of his hand to torture the incarnation. Oh please tell me Leiko gets a bit of just desserts not just her quiet slink of, with her head held high still full of herself, escape to her estates.
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2009 00:19 EDT
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Oh My God! you made Inu evil!!!! an not only that but he will be a full demon too!!! grrrr! that bugged me but besides that its amazing. although i dont like the inuyasha part i still really enjoy this story. its not only original but you really do keep on surprising me. i cant wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapters keep getting better, and better!!!! Thank you for the amazingly fast updates!!!! WOW!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 04:49 EDT
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Let's see Leiko deal with that. LOL
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 00:21 EDT
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omg. i'll admit that at 1st i was kinda iffy about the pairing, but u pulled it off wonderfully. i'm hooked on not only this, but ur other stories as well. keep up the good work, & plz try 2 update this one w/ more chapters asap!!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoop, finally! I love the playfulness of it all, so great. I can't stop reading! Keep up the excellent work ;D
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Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: dmsims3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, they're finally mates! Someone really needs to kick Inuyasha's butt! Please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This continues to be an AMAZING story!!!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 04:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree I am feeling sorry for Kikyou and I seriously dislike her character almost always. I also like that you've taken a different pairing. I think the Kag/Inu is old and the Kag/Sess gets old too and honestly Inu just doesn't deserve her. I think you write the characters very well and rather true to form. ~Anxiously awaiting the next chapter
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