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| "Tenshi" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Eiji Hyuuga On: September 04, 2009 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really liking it so far, thought you do make Kakashi look like a wimp a little bit :P But eh, still its good :P
| Reviewed By: speed killz On: August 29, 2009 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey bro, i like what you've got so far. You do have a considerable amount of grammar mistakes though, you should consider a beta. I could beta for you if you want. I like it, can't wait for more.
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