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| "Scared To Want You" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: akirayuki On: June 12, 2010 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...it's better than I thought. good job. i enjoy it very much. i rated everything 10 so i'm not sure if 1 the lowest or 10 is.
| Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 23:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww that was so cute :) But it seemed a little rushed. I know that happens to me when I know how a story is going to end and I really want to write the ending. I end up skimping on the details and such in between where I last loves a scene and the next. Maybe an epilogue would help. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this story thoroughly. You have me wondering when you are going to place the epilogue. There are several possible spots, all of which should be equally interesting. Until the epilogue, happy writings! ~'Tori-chan
| Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2009 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah! No! I must read more!! This is quite the interesting story. I don't believe I've read one like it. I enjoyed the way you portrayed Kyo and Yuki. This pairing is also my favorite Furuba one, but that's beside the point. :D I only caught a few grammar errors, but they were dismissible. It's odd that no one has reviewed yet. *humph* I can't wait for the next update! Happy writings! ~Tori-chan
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