| "Pigtailed Timeloops Omakes" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well as always a mastermind and a hit with every story you write I hope you finish some though XD And still want you to write out those I mentioned with my previous review. ;)
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its great to see a change from Innortal's Time Loop idea in such a way. And using your own stories for possible loops with Coming Home to Roost is much better then some of the crossover loops. And using School Days as a way to show Ranma's finely tuned instincts. I especially like the inclusion of Negi Springfield. Why not write a set of loops for Negi with his new sempai/sensei Ranma guiding him when they share a loop. Although I would have to ask to include one of the more normal girls in his class to join him eventually. And why stop there, why not have a loop with Negi replacing Shiro from the Fate/Stay series in the Holy Grail War. Throw in the Pactio system to have which Heroic Servant he had join him at Mahora. And with Mahorafest going on, have Ranma fight Colonel Sanders after seeing Negi beat Takamichi with his own Kanka techniques.
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Title: good!
Reviewed By: ordieth117 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesomeness and humor. Love this stuff.
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 07:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My my my so many interesting loops. Dakka Loop ( oh god my sides the hurt from laughting) This Loops for You (This one is so fucked up XD) These I hope you write them sometimes in a fullblown out fanfic. Oh I'd like to have them in a full story!!! Loop ABC Loop De Loop Looped For your eyes only Y, T & M I like Big loops and I can not lie 108 Loops just aren't enough Well thanks for writing thise wonderful story and I hope you update soon!!!
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