| "Harmony Parking Lot" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 10:49 CDT
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FOOOOOOOD FIIIIGHT!!!!!!! Epic! That was hilarious. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2010 22:40 CST
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Haha! I love the last bit about inviting them to dinner! It was really funny!
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Title: fellow writer
Reviewed By: lil jynx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really great and i must admit i am a sucker for these angst kind of story. It gets a bit fast paced and melodramatic at some points but i'll tell you this, i was sneaking to read it in class. Hurry and update. Don't make me regret making this my first favorite story. :)
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 13:10 CST
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haha good chapter! How is Sesshomaru gonna use Shippo?
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2010 23:18 CST
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It's a good update, but it's inconsistent, because you already had everybody realize Inuyasha and Kouga were youkai in chapter three. I understand how it goes, though, working on a story one chapter at a time. I would just recommend, if you don't work quickly enough between chapters, to reread through your older chapters to remind yourself fresh of where you left off, when you're ready to start working on the next chapter. All in all, though, nice work, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes from here.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2010 21:20 CST
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Hehe...fish tacos...
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 17:21 CDT
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Poor Kagome! But the whole kidnapping idea was cool. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 19:13 CDT
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Kagome is just a magnet for trouble isn't she? I can't wait for the next update so do it ASAP please!?
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 18:16 CDT
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wow! update soon pretty please!
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Reviewed By: Bamfin On: September 01, 2009 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So.....when's the next chapter? :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
looks like Miroku needs to step up the security around the joint.
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Reviewed By: Bamfin On: August 31, 2009 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Umm I don't usually leave reviews on mediaminer but I read ur little authors note before the story n I just want to tell you that this story is kick ass n you should keep writing!!!! I hope 10 means fuggin awesome on here...:)
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