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| "The Box" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: CorinneWaltes On: December 24, 2009 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is so interesting. This would be an amazing story, good enough to be actually published. You should consider it, you are very talented.
| Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2009 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Cow this is fantastic. You should definitely continue this story if you are in the right place to do so, it would be a big hit. By the way, I love your other stories too, and am still praying that you continue with Strength of Bond though it has become blaringly obvious that that may never happen, but I still pray =]
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 20:21 CDT
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i am intrigued. ♥
| Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very interesting im actually curious as to why they are there in the rooms being watched. you should continue this fanfiction instead of making a one shot.
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was so well done and i agree with the other reviewers... continue this, their story must be told... who put them there... who gives them clothes, feeds them... these things must be told ^__^ please dont keep us in the dark
| Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is beautiful, and if you don't mind me saying, deserves to be so much more than a one-shot.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa...weird, and deep. Makes you wonder what's really going on. I realize you can't go into any details because there's a word-count limit with these contests, which is both a blessing and a curse. The way you did this is so perfect in and of itself, and yet, it leaves you completely and totally wanting more! A sense of "But...what happened?" They wouldn't be in there for no reason, after all, especially with no memory of any kind of outside world (unless of course memory loss is an issue)... It really makes you wonder what disasters must have taken place at some previous date, yet they are still together, so in the end, that is all that matters.
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