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| "Alliance" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Shadowdog85 On: April 07, 2011 01:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well of LOVE this series, I've read all of them and I love how the characters changed throughout the stories. Please Please Please write more of this series! I would really love to see more Cloud/Rufus. And some Cloud/Tseng too. | Reviewed By: Didi Wednesday On: October 08, 2010 02:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
I haven't read fanfiction in a long time, but I'm so happy that I found this story. I spent the last week just reading your whole "Pass the Cloud" series. I have to admit: I started reading it for the porn, but I kept reading it for the plot. You have the perfect balance of sex and story. I have yet to find a single story that could pull that off! I always thought of Rude as the straightest guy in the world, but the way you wrote him was so convincing that I can't see him as anything BUT gay anymore! Some of your pairings I found a little odd, like Rude and Genesis or Reeve and Vincent, but again, the way you wrote them made me buy into it. I really liked how you kept them in character the whole time, even through the sex. I just want to say thank you sooooo much for writing this and sharing it with the rest of us. I'm probably asking for too much, but I wouldn't mind another sequel! XD You are a really brilliant writer, and this story, this series, was absolutely amazing. Please keep writing, even if its not fanfiction!
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