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Reviewed By: kait :) On: April 12, 2010 17:59 CDT
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lol half of the time i was reading this i would burst into random fits of laughter! the part at the end about Kagome still trying to get the beads on sesshomaru still cracks me up i get this funny mental picture of sesshy standing minding his own business when all the sudden kagome ninja tackles him from behind!the story was great i loved it.
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Title: fetch
Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2010 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI I love your story it's fun interesting sensual has a great plot and most of all it has Sesshoumaru and Kagome paired I love this couple. SEXY SESSHOUMARU CAN HUNT ME I SURE AS HELL WOULD"NT TRY TO GET AWAY BUT I"D DAMN SURE ATTACK HIM HE HE HE I"M SUCH A LECH. >>> LOL HUGS THANK YOU FOR WRITING A GREAT STORY
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Title: Sighs..
Reviewed By: Azn_Tofu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshomaru is such a sexy regal beast! Mmmm, if only there were more men like him... (sighs). I guess that's what makes hims so special. I envy Kagome so much in this one. Which makes me love it still. Arigato gozaimasu!
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Reviewed By: Isaiah96 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Impressive, this fanfiction totally pulled me out of reality in my time of need so i thank you very much. the ending... yes needs a little work but over all it was a great read and i look forward too reading anymore you may write or have. Thank You for your amazy story
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol thinking of InuYasha with anyone but Kagome make me uncomfortable. haha idk y. It doesnt bother me when Kagome is with anyone. This was a great fic!
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Reviewed By: GLily On: January 27, 2010 15:08 CST
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I haven't read up to the most recent chapter yet, but so far, I love the pairing. did notice though that you wrote earlier in the story (truth or tare time) that she loved the smell of lemon grass and that that was what her shampoo was, then in the part about her bath prior to mating said that she loved sandlewood... Not a bit point, but a contradiction. :-)
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha poor InuYasha.
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2009 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP!!!! WOW ok that was really hot and well worth the wait. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read another chapter
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Reviewed By: Sutlesarcasm, Not Signed In On: November 24, 2009 13:38 CST
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Oh, I don't know about that, for some reason, I suddenly feel the need for a cigarette (or 20). I once saw a poster that seems to apply...The sex in my house is so good that the neighbor's have to smoke.....LOL
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 16, 2009 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I bet the lemon's going to be GREAT!!!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 02:38 CDT
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great chpater hehe i can imagine the rather smug grin on his face after thanking inu...the chapters seem to be all out of order now for instance playing dead comes up as the second chapter now
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 23:36 CDT
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Oh My God! that was so damn sexy. i am glad you added the smut because you can never have too much smut. i loved this it was amazing. and now I have to gl look for some freezing water!
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Reviewed By: dejaz On: October 25, 2009 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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there is GOD!!! HAZZAH!!! that was so awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: Finbastard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I may be a InuKag fan, but I like this fic! Still, poor Inu...
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Reviewed By: kjpan On: October 25, 2009 12:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
ure right. I wish someone came to my rescue like that.
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