| "The Spoils of War" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Seneca_Nya On: July 14, 2011 20:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! Another chapter! I have not forgotten about this fic and I'm glad it's back =) I'm happy to hear the King died, that way, Shuichi can get to Eiri quicker! I'm hoping Shuichi falls in love with Eiri at first sight... his attraction to Hiro is worrying me a bit >.> |
Reviewed By: SenecaNya On: October 05, 2010 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy to see a new chapter to this fic. It is too much an extraordinarily exciting and original work to be left alone. Shuichis pairing sure took me by surprise. Not Ryuichi, but the fact that Ryuichi made Shuichi take control. From the last chapter, I honestly thought Ryuichi would ravish the boy, but I guess his desire to be f'ed was too much to handle. It's neat that Shus first time was as the dominate, but he's going to have to experience being on the submissive side for his master =D. I can't wait till they land!!
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Reviewed By: drskippy On: April 22, 2010 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy well thought out alternate universes, and the extend of the detail you put into your story's world and customs. I am very excited to see what happens next. I hope the next chapter comes up soon!
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Reviewed By: Ashole1234 On: December 07, 2009 03:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all of your stories! This is so interesting so far and I can't wait to see what happens! Update as soon as possible!
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