| "I'll Not Force Your Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU for this beautiful story I love it your an excellent writer with a great imagination
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2010 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I finally found you here on MM.org (its Jackie btw)... not that I've been on too much recently but still. Very cute little one-shot. Pure unadulterated lemony fluff... and it does not suck- quite frankly none of your writing sucks; its all awesome. -Jackie
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Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 20:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really love it. It's sweet, it's smutty. Fantastic!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How funny, my very first story was also a 'he has to mate with her or else she'll die' PWP, although that's about where the similarities end. Mine still needs to undergo a major edit-fest. I agree with the others, though. While your other stories definitely seem more advanced, this one (at least now that it's been revised) really didn't seem that bad. I liked it.
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 22:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
nope I didn't think it sucked. I really liked it and was shocked when you said this had been your first story. I thought something poped in your head while writting one of the other stories. Though after I read that, I must tell you as all us artist do...you have improved, but this one is still something to be very proud of.
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2009 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it! it didnt suck but i must be honest with you i like some of your other stories better. still i'm glad you posted it. it really shows how much you have improved as a writer! really great story! i also really liked Kags Mom ^_^ she was cool.
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