| "The Dragon and the Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Addicted On: January 03, 2003 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really cool. I like the idea for the story a lot. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: 1/2 Demon grrl On: December 06, 2002 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase continue its great, more asap. Im 1/2 demon see?
Im part dingo so write OR ELSE!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Miani On: November 15, 2002 14:43 CST
Comment/Review:
August 6th, girl? Where have the updates been? Lazy, good for nothing... j/k Love it so far. Kepp them coming. |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Eyes---forgot to log in! ^_~ On: November 15, 2002 14:41 CST
Comment/Review:
*squeals of delight* That was so good! I loved it! I only got the chance to read the prologue before, but now I finally got to read the first chapter! You know what? I think they should be left on the planet and have to fend for themselves for like a year or something. Then, while they're there, they fall in love and finally... well... you know. *wiggles eyebrows suggestively* Then their army rescue squads will come back for them, and they'll have to seperate. Then they meet up again like three years later, and Vegeta knows it's her and sees Trunks. Wouldn't that be awesome? And then... ^_^' Sorry, got a little carried away there. It's a good idea though, one of my few. Think about it, unless you already have your fic planned out. Looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: Kitten On: August 08, 2002 11:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Alwright,
i never leave reveiws. But this is wayyyyy too interesting
write more please! I'll be looking for your updates! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOoo! Not the mallet of doom! anything but that! This is the beginnigs of a great fic! I loved the picture that went with it. You need to make a Vegeta one to go with it. Hurry and update! |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 23:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Like most of your stories this one seems to be very good! I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: SaiyanWarrior [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fanfic!!!! Haven't seen one written like this yet! can't wait to see the next chapter |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: July 25, 2002 19:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Zu-Chan here. just wanted ta say im interested in your ficcy.
post more ASAP,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Kafei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW
I like it ^^v
Keep going girl!!! |
