| "Duty Versus Love" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: matsuri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2012 15:03 EDT
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i can't believe this story hasn't gotten more reviews!! this story is incredible!! i am very, very picky when it comes to fanfiction, and you're story pulled me right in. it's a very well written story. i absolutely love all the detail you put into every chapter and i love how you make the characters so real and passionate without taking away their personality. i don't know if you plan on continuing this story, but i really hope to see more. i will definitely be keeping tabs on this fanfiction just in case. |
Title: Plzzzz more!
Reviewed By: Dedicated reader On: September 11, 2010 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've checked this everydAy since ur last update! Plzzzzzzzzzzz UR KILLING ME HERE! WRITE MORE PLZZZZZZZ!
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Reviewed By: Sean Cole On: June 29, 2010 02:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My goodness you are so incredibly talented! This has captivated me for the last week, up into the wee hours of the morning. This is by far the best piece of work I've read in a long time and already you've facilitated such a strong bond between myself and the characters in the story and I can't get enough! Please finish this soon, because I have to know what happens next! I'm eager to know how in the world Aang and Katara could possibly parent so many children as wel as keep their sanity. Your exploration into the dynamics of creating, or recreating, an entire race of people is fascinating and very gripping. I'll be quite pleased if you manage to pull THAT one off. A few other random thoughts: Iroh's getting old as well, isn't he? Azula's character is still kind of intriguing. Future applications of a new reformed Azula? Will we EVER get closure about Ursa? Will there possibly ever be some rockiness with the Kataang relationship? (nothing to horrible though!) Or with any other couples? WILL APPA EVER FIND A MATE??? (save the sky bison!) Any violent breakouts between radical patriots? The addition of Kin is pretty coo'.... and etc, etc. I'd love to help you springboard some ideas too (if you're ever interested...) BUT ENOUGH with my seemingly endless fanboy rant. You really have quite the story here and you should never stop writing. ~SC
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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2010 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story and I hope you update really soon!
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Reviewed By: t0k0 On: January 31, 2010 14:59 EST
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just got around to reading the last farewell. again, gorgeous, and im sorry for your personal lose. its a great thing to be able to chanel that somewhat negative energy into something as nice as this. i offer my encouragement for the oncoming chapters.
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Reviewed By: t0k0 On: December 20, 2009 20:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I searched avatar fanfictions cause i just finished the series, and yours was about halfway down the list. out of curiousity i started reading and have to say it was just gorgeous. well writen, well thought out, better than i can really hope to do...i simply lack the attention. anyway, please continue with the updates and merry christmas.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2009 23:14 EST
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Dum, dum, DUUUM! We now have our antagonist for the story. Another nice chapter, though with Suki expecting, wouldn't that qualify her for the Airbender repopulation program in a few years? ;)
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 17:21 EST
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Fascinating. To be honest, I thought the Ultimate Technique (C) would involve using a vacuum since it follows the same logic as the others. What interesting is how powerful a vacuum is, I've seen entire huge metal storage tanks caved in by the forces of vacuums. Still liking it so far, but where's the bad guys? ;p
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 11:56 EST
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Heh, tea and good advice indeed. Definitely a fun read so far, and something I look forward to reading more of. Update again soon, neh? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 15:11 EST
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Married women, eh? Not a bad idea but I don't know if that's feasible once the kids are born. I mean who is going to raise them? Will they live with Aang? How will Katara deal with Aang sleeping with strange women every other night? Leave him on his own or stay nearby (or join them, the kinky little minx ;p) I thought the whole kit and caboodle were going to go with him to one of the Air Temples.
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Reviewed By: Von Kyon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 02:10 EST
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I'm about halfway through the first chapter right now. I notice that you said Aang knew "soulbending", but that is incorrect. It's Energybending that he used against Ozai. Other than that, pretty good story so far.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 11:00 EDT
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In all of the Avatar stories I've read, I've never come across an Aang harem scenario. It'll be interesting how you develop this and whether other characters get involved in this crazy scenario. It'd be hilarious if Ty Lee and Jin end up being some of the concubines... Anyway, good job so far.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2009 14:59 EDT
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Heh, fun story so far, and moving faster than I expected to boot. heh. Continue to update on this site, ja ne.
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