| "Bankotsu's Futuristic Escapades" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 23:02 CST
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I read from chapter 14 to 18 in 1 shot & have a question & 2 minor corrections; is Tomi Ban's grandfather, his father's father or his great-grandfather which would be Ban's grandfather's father? You kinda have both here & there, or the phrasing is a bit confusing. Also you have Kagome's family name spelled wrong, it's Higurashi not Higaurashi & Shichinintai not Schichinatai. Looked up the Band of Seven in the Inuyasha Profiles book & it has Ban's age at death as 17, Jakotsu as 20 & the rest are 24+ & all from the East country. I was curious.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2009 20:15 CDT
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Just curious, does Bankotsu still have the elongated star tattoo on his forehead or not? The band of 7 all had those facial tattoos, although I think Bankotsu's was the least extreme of them.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 21:25 CDT
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i really like this one I look forward to future chappies keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2009 09:17 CDT
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Well I enjoyed it, you do have a rather odd name goof though, after the deja vu flash you have Kohaku instead of Souta raising the games difficulty level. I'm really interested in seeing where this goes.
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Reviewed By: Animegirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 15:19 CDT
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AWSOMENESS! poor kags^ ^ O
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 18:44 CDT
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I rather enjoyed it. I did wonder where Kirara is though, I would think Sango, Miroku & Shippou would ride her home, unless they were going to Edo & not Sango's village.
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