| "Cataclysm" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: konekochan74 On: December 08, 2009 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
The lack of organization makes it hard to read, and i am personally an inuyasha fan, and i couldnt continue reading past the part where he hit kagome, i mean thats really extreme and out of character for him, regardless of the situation. Its a good idea for a story, and i swear this is not a flame, i mean ive read really gory and violent stories before, this one just needs a little bit of cleaning up in format.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: November 28, 2009 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like the fanfic or the ending. The ending was terrible...no detail.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 03:23 CDT
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I'm rather enjoying this. I think youki is 1 of those words like thrust where the plural is the same as the singular, like it's thrust or thrusts but not thrusted, so I think it would be youki or youki' to denote more than 1.
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 not logged in On: October 19, 2009 21:39 CDT
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I hate it that Inuyasha turned into a real ass and had to be killed. I really do like this story. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 16:32 CDT
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I like it. Just as an FYI Kitsune-bi = foxfire as in Shippo's blue-green fire attack, general kitsune energy would probably be ki.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 00:36 CDT
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I like it & you got the god trees' name right Goshinboku.
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