"Word Games Series" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: OK Reviewed By: rainsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 06:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: HUMOR:Great! GRADE:B+ PLOT:Non-existent.What's the POINT of the game,WHAT does it have to do with school and MOST OF ALL, if you're trying to make a relationship bloom between Syaoran and Sakura plus Tomoyo and Eriol,you're doing a very bad job of it GRADE:C Writing: No spelling mistakes,that's good.The conversation you put was OK, though it just had to get mushy and stupid towards the end(not to mention I don't understand how that came around). GRADE:B- OVERALL GRADE:B-
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Title: etssmnrhtm Reviewed By: rainsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 05:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: It was extremely funny but it really didn't seem to have a storyline behind it. Did you just write it because you didn't have anything else to do or something? It sure seems so.
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Reviewed By: marcy On: July 14, 2004 22:17 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: great sotyr plz plz plz plz plz plz update as soon as you can plz
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 23:31 CDT Comment/Review: great job plz continue soon
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Reviewed By: marcy On: June 06, 2004 21:25 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was a really cute and sweet and i would really really like 2 read some more please and great story please kkep it up and wright at list some more chapters please please please please.
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Reviewed By: not applicable On: July 18, 2003 01:19 CDT Comment/Review: I thought they were both really sweet! |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris On: March 24, 2002 23:59 CST Comment/Review: I would like to read more! |
Reviewed By: SorceressMidori On: September 01, 2001 08:15 CDT Comment/Review:
nice fic! i wish to read more! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kirei Miko On: October 27, 2001 22:17 CDT Comment/Review: WAI! So nice and kawaii and fluffy, just the way I like it. ^.^ I liked 'Those Three Little Words and Other Short Stories' on fanfiction.net, but I REALLY like this too. Please continue writing this! |