| "The Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2009 14:30 CDT
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*sigh* ur rite...we desperately need some dialogue for the kitchen scene...tho and kc do seem a bit out of place as it is...i will work on that...
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Reviewed By: Mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2009 14:27 CDT
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yea the lechery did take quite awhile to fix which is y part 2 is so short...it took most of the weekend to tweak correctly...thanks baby
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Reviewed By: Baby Marie On: October 12, 2009 10:53 CDT
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ummmmmm..... we need to add a part in the kitchen to where baby is finding out were tho & kc are. since she did say she was going to call them. it doesnt seem right. no convo and they just show up. and good job on rewriting the part of yusukes lechery bravo *gives mehi a standing ovation*
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Reviewed By: Baby Marie On: October 09, 2009 19:00 CDT
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Ok.... you two have your nice little race. On your mark....get set...go!!! now that you fixed that nice little incident this will be really funny to see. oh well time to get back to watching yu yu hakusho. Thanks Kit!!!
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Reviewed By: Mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 14:40 CDT
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Lol...Kitta you startled me....i was kinda hoping i was getting a reveiw from someone somewhere in the world who didnt know me, had never read the SO, and had liked it when they did...but hearing from u is good too....love the idea by the way...tho i dunno about a race...i guess if u have time for a race it would be fun...and kit u did too read it...well sort of cause u wrote a bit of it...
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Reviewed By: Kitta0 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 11:14 CDT
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Wow, so this is the infamous soup opera, I do and don't remember reading it. I guess it was a really long time ago. But you know this gives me and idea to put 'School Mates' on here. What ya think Mehi? We could have a race to see who can put chapters up quickest. Oh! and I absolutly couldn't forget about Crocodile! I loved that one too!
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