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| "Thoughts of the Count" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: That Was Marvelous
Reviewed By: ArienVaerun [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2010 23:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only recently returned to MM and similarly only recently read Pet Shop of Horrors (typically I run with my sis on AFF as AnimeAngelSisters) I was very impressed with how well you got into their heads. You kept D as aloof and yet as kind as he is in the manga with the wonderously irritated undertone of sexual frustration. And Leon was perfect cocky, arrogant, rude, crude, and yet in absolute denial about D being innocent. He has a very... rough personality and I think that he would very much have thoughts like those and deny them and also would... try to lure D to himself because he needs him so badly. He's the kind of man who's the last to realize something about himself. Yes, the story is a bit on the short side but I think that's part of the charm of your writing style. To what I noticed your spelling and grammar was accurate namely because my grammar and spelling police instinct didn't kick in. That was actually fairly original I must say most people would not peg Leon as uke and the fact that you did sets you apart. I also like that you keep having D refer to Leon in such a possesive manner. It makes him take on a slightly more agressive role that might actually be what Leon senses under the surface and thusly why he thinks him so dangerous I am a huge Yaoi fangirl and so this story was most enjoyable for me a deffinite 10 out of 10 I'd give you a 100 out of 10 but the scale won't let me XP keep writing and If your ever looking for someone to help you with yaoi I'd be more than happy to. | Reviewed By: medhea On: June 30, 2010 12:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
Very good story!!!
| Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2010 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! It's really rare to find good Seme D fics, I love yours, hope you make more. ^.^V
| Reviewed By: Weaver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2010 16:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
Thumbs up for an uke!Leon! I think I have a thing for loudmouthed ukes. haha I thought it was overall a good fic. I'm secretly hoping you'll continue with the mpreg! haha
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