| "Cutie Bunny" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: great story
Reviewed By: joe32 On: February 03, 2010 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great story. I was just wondering if you were planning on continuing it or any other of you stories, as you seem not to have been active for a while. In any case I am really looking forward to updates.
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Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice to see that this series has been updated! Please continue the good work!
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Reviewed By: Teggy On: November 01, 2009 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the continuation. Would like to see more male Ranma action too, and female Ranma on female action.
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Reviewed By: Innortal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You created the perfect follow-up, bringing in elements let untouched from the first story. I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start to the sequel of Bunnies delight. Take courage, controversy can mean that the story is worthwhile, at least in some circles. Ciao, ☺
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Reviewed By: KCKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2009 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I know that this a Ranma fic where he gained the powers of a succubus, but did not change into one... except in this chapter we hear that Ranko is "Changing" into one... I hope that you show which way it is going. ======================== Like I said in emails to you CRose, I enjoyed Bunny's Delight until Ranma became the new Mr. Dark. > Yes, I know you said in this chapter that every girl that works at the Delight is a willing Slut, but your words at the end of Bunny's Delight showed a bit of brainwashing.
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always a very good story even if I'd like to have the others as well updated. ;) I hope to get to see much more of it as well how Ranma deals with the Succubus and how she will react or even 'nearly loosing control' of seeing the really unexpected male Ranma. ^^
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made my day, do you know that? I'm so happy to see this being continued. This is one of my favourite Ranma lemon stories ever and I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: saysu On: October 12, 2009 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was hoping for a sequal to Bunny Delight and we got it. For this story I like the setup and hope in the coming chapters to see how this will all end up.
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Reviewed By: TJG On: October 12, 2009 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good. What has Ranma been learning from Happosai?
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: mrtrap On: October 11, 2009 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Pure and simple. You're one of the best authors in Ranma fanfiction. I hope you update soon I don't care what you update, I just hope that it is soon.
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