"DETENTION!" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: *distressed* Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 12:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review: Um...bbbb bu b but...*awww* the horror, my eyes, my brain. I'm so confused. It started out so nice and ended up somewhere stange and totally... just strange. I just went for the title maybe I missed something in the preview blub, I so shocked when he exposed her secret. wow... I'm sorry if this is not a nice review, but I was unprepared for that @.@.
| Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 11:30 CDT Comment/Review: I like it. But it would be great if this was expanded and not so quick. Oh and did you read any of the ficts I mentioned or had you read them all already? :-)
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