| "Watching" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: ashxmay On: November 09, 2012 06:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update u did a great job keeping who they where..ya vegetas nice but u still kept him him u did super great |
Reviewed By: Doodle Penguin On: July 14, 2010 00:37 EDT
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AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! And it was getting SOOOO GOOD!!!! Please update soon! PLEASE!!!! I cant wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: fruits_punch_samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Holy shit. You have done an outstanding job here; I am appreciative of how (incredibly) believable you have made this. Never had I thought I'd be so suckered into a fic where these three are so delightfully slutty. Oh ho ho please, please don't stop!! This fic is absolutely fabulous!!! More sluttiness, please!!!
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Reviewed By: Grezi On: April 12, 2010 15:04 EDT
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I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet - let alone that hardly anyone has! This is one of the few DBZ yaoi/romance stories that I find actually well written - and I don't mean only your general writing style, which is wonderfully smooth and captivating, but also the overall scene-setting; it seems like you've known exactly where this story would go from the very beginning, and make the flow of events seem very logical and natural - while keeping the story unpredictable and full of twists! Great job! The character writing is great, and the way you let the reader get occasional, brief glimpses into someone's psyche is really the heart and soul of this story. Every time I get a peek at someone's inner thoughts, it just leaves me hungry for more. I especially love how you write Yamcha and his self-contradicting emotions, and it's the curiousity about how he's going to end up in all this that keeps me reading. You've succeeded in creating working chemistry between all three characters, but the sparks between Vegeta and Yamcha are just beautiful. All in all, it's so good that I'd still be reading this story even if I wasn't a fan of these pairings to begin with. I'm really biting my nails and nearly falling off the edge of my seat now, dying to know how the story will continue. Please keep up your brilliant and beautiful writing work. You're quite a wizard with a verbal wand :)
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Reviewed By: an On: December 17, 2009 21:11 EST
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Your story is very well done. You do a great job building the interest and inter character tension. Keep it up!
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Anne Midnight Hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2009 13:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! The fic is totally awesome! Like all your work(HEHEHE)Love it! You made Vegeta the central focus of the story and he didn't even had a singel POV except from the fisrt chap. Poor Goku, heart broken and trying to keep his promises to Yamcha. I don't usually like Yamcha, but in this fic he's just cool! And the Stomp link? Defenetly something Saiyans would find entretaining. It primitive and pure of energy! Love it! PLZ! Update sooon! Here or in your site! WOOOT!
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