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| "The Hentai's Apprentice" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: fr1nkl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2010 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha WOW this series is so hilarious! Good job! haha lovesick naraku LOL :D
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh bloody hell, LOL. Under normal circumstances there's no way I'd buy something like that happening, but with the Hentai Gods getting involved, well then there you go. Hehehe. You were also wise to twist it that Sango's whole family isn't really dead after all, because otherwise, them making friends would still seem too much of a stretch, even for a crack-fic. But what's even better, that means that the gods' interference with Naraku just right now wasn't as drastic a change to his personality as one would assume. Apparently, he'd been more of a softy all along than what he'd been playing at. Very interesting twist. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!Oh bloody hell, LOL. Under normal circumstances there's no way I'd buy something like that happening, but with the Hentai Gods getting involved, well then there you go. Hehehe. You were also wise to twist it that Sango's whole family isn't really dead after all, because otherwise, them making friends would still seem too much of a stretch, even for a crack-fic. But what's even better, that means that the gods' interference with Naraku just right now wasn't as drastic a change to his personality as one would assume. Apparently, he'd been more of a softy all along than what he'd been playing at. Very interesting twist. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
| Reviewed By: Kirara_Cutie316 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 08:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your series!! Please update soon! Pretty please with a cherry on top. ;3 And i was wondering...when you're finished are you gonna put the series all together? Like, chapter-ish? because i feel i might have missed one or two...or read a couple out of order. hehe (^_^;)
| Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God! that was hilarious! i am excited for your next update. I hope that you are feeling better! thanks for writing and updating!
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