Reviewed By: Lyle Fitzgerald [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent start, Fujita-san. Very sleek and F. Scott Fitzgeraldlike. Some of your personifications were a bit over the top, but it's anime, you can get away with it. I hope your work meets with greater success as it remains posted- I know how hard it is to get people to read original fan fiction. (ahem) Speaking of which, would you be so kind as to read mine?
-Lyle |
