Reviewed By:iavasechui [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2010 10:08 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: It was pretty good and funny and you got the bragging and evil dm just right (my dm can scare people with his laugh too...) the only part i didn't like was the surprise yaoi at the end, you really should have had a warning in the summary about that.