| "My Boyfriend Is A Stripper" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, an interesting chapter, and story so far. No demons, magic or otherwise, but a decent tale none-the-less. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2010 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes it has been awhile...but I'm still here lol it always nice to see authors come back after being gone for awhile. I believe this story has potential.
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Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 21:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a great story. I think it is very interesting. I hope you update soon! I really am curious what Kurama was wearing.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2010 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is interesting can't wait to see how this unfoldes
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Reviewed By: ruthie balboa On: January 16, 2010 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do not have a lot to this work yet, so it leaves the reader seriously unsatisfied with it. I would be willing to beta for you but you will have to use my email. My safest email to give you that I know can stand spam from others who might be reading this and selling it, is 'martianbunny' and then '@gmail.com'. I broke it up so people won't recognize the email address entirely at first and sell it. Umm, I think your writing stye is great but you need more subtance. Good luck and I hope to hear from you soon.
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