| "Senshi Unleased" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: SleepySango [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling... people don't "role" others, they "rule" others... I've only read the first chapter, I like it, but the spellig and grammar errors bother me and distract. I recommend proofreading you fic, spellchecking (Microsoft Word checks grammer, too), and possibly getting a beta reader. Just my recommendations. I hate to see a great fic acheive anything less than it's potential because of something so basic as spellign and grammar. |
Reviewed By: FuyuKuri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 16:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read it!!!! Umm.... Hi! That was nice. More, please!
PS: Sorry that everybody else sux and won't review... Maybe they're reviewing Heat, "Hentai's and a Lot of Nose Bleeds".... |
Reviewed By: FuyuKuri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CAN'T KEEP UP! Before I could even read one, there were three more! Me likes lots!! |
Reviewed By: FuyuKuri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You fixed-ed it!!! No slapping allowed!!
*snatches fan and flings it in Jaken's general direction*
Great fic. MORE MOOSHIE-NESS!! Ahh! Must... have... romance.... Laterz! |
Reviewed By: FuyuKuri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great, again, so far, but I can't read chapters 7 and 8....Please fix...Please? |
Reviewed By: FuyuKuri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading your fic. So far, I'm only on Chapter 4, but that's because I just started reading today. I love Sesshoumaru/Mature-Rin and Sesshoumaru/Kagome pairings, so I'm hoping that the fic turns out in the first form. I'll keep reviewing as I go along. I know what it's like, looking out for reviews. I had to take my own fic "Tainted" down once because I got discouraged. Don't give up! |
