| "Escaping Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: GoldenDust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2009 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great start to the story! I really look forward to the next chapter! Fantastic work!
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Title: Great start!
Reviewed By: msissyburrows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was great I hope to read more in the near future!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 20:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Really interesting take on post Namek. It's good that Bulma kept true to herself enough to fight back even under those circumstances. I can't wait to see where you take it from here.
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Title: forgot
Reviewed By: UsakoChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
i so forgot to put that im so digging this story!! great job keep it up. :)
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Title: drama!
Reviewed By: UsakoChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
i was really into the story.. i kinda didnt like how in the end bulma changed her attitude so fast from suffering, scared and her bravery to so calm and wanting. i think she should have been angery, beaten, and not trusting of vegeta. maybe vegeta could have cleaned her in his steaming bathroom..lol
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