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"Destroyed Happiness" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ]
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 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 10, 2010 07:12 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wonderful story... really liked it... nice happy ending... good job... great work!
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 18, 2010 02:50 CDT
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i guess she just needed closure and talking to kikyou did it for her. nice of kikyou to cooperate. -- happy endings *sigh* ♥
 Reviewed By: elektrik buzz  On: March 25, 2010 21:38 CDT
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They're talking again yay! Aiko is so going to bring them back together.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 03, 2010 20:13 CST
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poor kid, wants a father real bad. he said everything very nicely--probably had a sneaking suspicion that she wasn't asleep. if you live as husband and wife, you can know what will wake a person up (then again, sometimes it's dangerous to wake people up, especially if they wake up swinging). ♣ i found the last bit rather amusing-- inuyasha like a puppy, going on and on, and sesshoumaru in a murderous bent (at least it isn't directed toward his brother for once). LOL ♥
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 06, 2009 15:02 CST
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drunk people are impulsive and unreasonable-- one should never attempt to reason with the drunk, the high, or the insane. one has to wait until sobriety (there's no hope for the insane-- my husband is clinically insane and one deals with the insane whichever way works at the time). ♣ she should have realized on reflection that he behaved quite well considering his level of intoxication and that doesn't lie. impulse control is very low when under the influence and the 'truth' comes blurting out much easier. ♦ maybe he could acknowledge how difficult it must have been for her to go through pregnancy and single parenthood, and he wished he could have been there for her. ♥
 Reviewed By: liveember  On: November 25, 2009 13:49 CST
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Inuyasha was acting kind of harsh there. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 24, 2009 06:21 CST
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wow, see what happens when i don't read everything from an author. i missed out on a story that didn't scare me and give me nightmares, that the characters were relatively normal and not psycho. ♣ i don't think that kagome is the bad guy, there are a few things that explain her actions, although i believe she is equally culpable as inuyasha and the others. 1.kagome was pregnant when she left him, in the best of circumstances pregnancy hormones make one insane and irrational. 2.she attempted to contact him through sesshoumaru, that message never reached him (although she should have gone to him and instead of assuming he had moved on, told him she was expecting [see reason #1]). 3.he attempted to contact her through her gf-- i understand him not wanting to intrude on her life so his contacting ayumi wasn't bad-- her gf told him she was married when she should have told him she refused to be a go-between. she shares more responsibility than sesshoumaru for lying. she also is culpable in perpetuating and encouraging preggo/hormonal kagome in her stubborn refusal to forgive.-- kagome should have been thinking clearly enough after her daughter's first year if her pregnancy had been extremely hormonal (i was preggers when i broke up with my ex and i went from tears to murderous rage for the whole nine-- it's a wonder my son wasn't born defective-- he's twenty-three now and sometimes i wonder...). --now they're both even and they both have to get over it and do what's best for the little one. ♥
 Reviewed By: Hoshihands  On: November 13, 2009 18:16 CST
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You almost gave me a heart attack. I am so glad Inuyasha didn't do anything with that skank!
 Reviewed By: elektrik buzz  On: November 12, 2009 17:11 CST
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Sesshomaru oh Sesshomaru why did you not convey to Inuyasha thT kgome was looking for him a long time ago.
 Reviewed By: slaying taija  On: November 09, 2009 23:05 CST
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No way could Kagome have moved on. Or did she?
 Reviewed By: Lal Mirch  On: November 08, 2009 01:20 CST
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Dammit, Inuyasha should do the math, how hard is it for him to realize the child could possibly be his.
 Reviewed By: kiliro  On: November 07, 2009 20:58 CST
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Great balls of butter, Aiko is Inuyasha's! I can just feel it in my bones.
 Reviewed By: oniguts  On: November 07, 2009 19:47 CST
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No way. Ayumi has got to be lying! There is no way Kagome could forget about Inuyasha so quickly.
 Reviewed By: elektrik buzz  On: November 07, 2009 17:53 CST
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Hmm I'm surprised Sesshoumaru never told Kagome anything. Then again he never seems the type to get into anyones business.
 Reviewed By: liveember  On: October 25, 2009 21:45 CDT
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Awww I kind of hoped they would get back together. I'd love it if you kept going, who cares if it is just 3 chapters.
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