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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2009 06:21 CST
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wow, see what happens when i don't read everything from an author. i missed out on a story that didn't scare me and give me nightmares, that the characters were relatively normal and not psycho. ♣ i don't think that kagome is the bad guy, there are a few things that explain her actions, although i believe she is equally culpable as inuyasha and the others. 1.kagome was pregnant when she left him, in the best of circumstances pregnancy hormones make one insane and irrational. 2.she attempted to contact him through sesshoumaru, that message never reached him (although she should have gone to him and instead of assuming he had moved on, told him she was expecting [see reason #1]). 3.he attempted to contact her through her gf-- i understand him not wanting to intrude on her life so his contacting ayumi wasn't bad-- her gf told him she was married when she should have told him she refused to be a go-between. she shares more responsibility than sesshoumaru for lying. she also is culpable in perpetuating and encouraging preggo/hormonal kagome in her stubborn refusal to forgive.-- kagome should have been thinking clearly enough after her daughter's first year if her pregnancy had been extremely hormonal (i was preggers when i broke up with my ex and i went from tears to murderous rage for the whole nine-- it's a wonder my son wasn't born defective-- he's twenty-three now and sometimes i wonder...). --now they're both even and they both have to get over it and do what's best for the little one. ♥
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Reviewed By: Hoshihands On: November 13, 2009 18:16 CST
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You almost gave me a heart attack. I am so glad Inuyasha didn't do anything with that skank!
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Reviewed By: elektrik buzz On: November 12, 2009 17:11 CST
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Sesshomaru oh Sesshomaru why did you not convey to Inuyasha thT kgome was looking for him a long time ago.
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Reviewed By: slaying taija On: November 09, 2009 23:05 CST
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No way could Kagome have moved on. Or did she?
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Reviewed By: Lal Mirch On: November 08, 2009 01:20 CST
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Dammit, Inuyasha should do the math, how hard is it for him to realize the child could possibly be his.
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Reviewed By: kiliro On: November 07, 2009 20:58 CST
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Great balls of butter, Aiko is Inuyasha's! I can just feel it in my bones.
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: November 07, 2009 19:47 CST
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No way. Ayumi has got to be lying! There is no way Kagome could forget about Inuyasha so quickly.
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Reviewed By: elektrik buzz On: November 07, 2009 17:53 CST
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Hmm I'm surprised Sesshoumaru never told Kagome anything. Then again he never seems the type to get into anyones business.
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Reviewed By: liveember On: October 25, 2009 21:45 CDT
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Awww I kind of hoped they would get back together. I'd love it if you kept going, who cares if it is just 3 chapters.
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Reviewed By: elektrik buzz On: October 25, 2009 15:31 CDT
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So he was cheating on Kikyo with Kagome? Dude that is so sick.What about their mutual friends? Didn't anyone know that Inuyasha was married before?
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Reviewed By: Hoshihands On: October 25, 2009 13:56 CDT
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That was truly heartbreaking. In a sick way I loved the angst, and yet I want you to keep going.
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Reviewed By: koinu lover On: October 25, 2009 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope enough people review so we can get more chapters.I can understand Inuyasha's reasoning, but why would he enter into a relationship with Kagome before ending anything with Kikyo? Did he think he might have worked things out with Kikyo if things did not work out with Kagome?
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Reviewed By: Lal Mirch On: October 25, 2009 01:13 CDT
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WOW I feel so bad for Kagome. Did Kouga do shoddy work on purpose or what.
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: October 25, 2009 00:50 CDT
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Damn I so did not see that happening!!! Oh please write more I have to find out what happens.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going! There is so much more to this, totally continue!!! This is wonderful, the angst is great! Awesome job, I loved it!
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