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| "Maple Pancakes" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Sesshoki On: February 04, 2011 16:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good fanfic, pretty creative chose of lube as well. Maple syrup, maple pancakes, ha ha ha. | Reviewed By: tallie On: October 29, 2009 18:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really satisfying read except your choice of lube. With a name like maple pancakes it shouldn't have been a surprise. Maple syrup or syrup in general is sticky and that is the oposite of lube. It's little common knowledge things like that, that can ruin the entire story for me.
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