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| "Trick or Treat?" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 14:23 CDT
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Oh, no, the Big Bad Wolf got Souta! Serves him right for bursting in on them like that. I'm still upset with him, and now Shippou is in the same boat. I was just kidding about the BBW, but you know, it really could be a wolf (or wolf youkai). Inuyasha said "I thought I smelled..." I wouldn't put it past you to stick Kouga or one of his nasty relatives in there. I really liked Kagome's costume. It was very creative, and alluring yet mostly innocent at the same time. Their reactions to each other were very believable throughout the chapter, and the dialogue was nice as well. Just one more thing: Inuyasha saying "if you love somebody, then you should tell them." Really, Inuyasha? If that isn't the height of hypocrisy (at least assuming he knows he loves her, as in this story), I don't know what is!
| Reviewed By: kitsunemagic1 On: October 27, 2009 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All 10's, per usual! Can't wait to see the next chapters, I know they're gonna be great! Poor Souta lol
| Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 16:06 CDT
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I hope your not waiting til next Halloween to continue it... That'd be sad... I might cry! Lol great story so far, was funny how he thought he was a real monkey instead of a pirate. Looking forward to seeing the rest, keep up the awesome work =D
| Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 11:30 CDT
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great story! can't wait for the rest of it!
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooo! You can't astop ther! LOL Great halloween story darlin' :)
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