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Title: Loved It!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2010 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you turned the whole Kaou arc around on Inuyasha in this one, making him see it from the other side of the coin, so to speak. Another story from you going right onto my favs list! Amber
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2010 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as usual. Nice way to find out that youkai still exist in the future. And great job on resolving the misunderstanding. As this is canon we at least know that Kagome will eventually get her happy ending. I liked how for once they admitted their feelings but decided not to take it to the next level. It was a nice change of pace. Excellent work.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2010 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
That was really good!
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2009 05:15 CDT
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Nice story. I loved how you have integrated your story in the manga. Good luck with your future stories!
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2009 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perfectly done, loved it! Just like always. Funny how she stretched into him in the morning like that and they're both like: "Umm... What now?" looking forward to your next work splendent, and as always you are my Goddess! P.S. There was one part where you spelled Inuyasha as Inuyahsa, but I dont think I really caught any other errors.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2009 17:20 CDT
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Nice Halloween tale...I particularly liked how you have them intentionally putting off revving up their relationship, but at the same time being much closer...this is pretty much how it seems to be in the manga. Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2009 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You certainly have a way with the warm and fuzzies. Well, that goes for fanfiction in general. The time off from writing didn't dull your writing skills at all. This was the same type of romantic, provocative, detail-oriented fic that I have come to expect from you. I really appreciated how you wove the story into the manga. The stories that you can just plug into the world of Inuyasha are the most "real." Overall, this was a very fun piece, with just the right amount of romance and fluff at the end. I enjoyed it very much.
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2009 11:16 CDT
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Heh, same as King Baka. xD I was wondering if there was gonna be a romantic interlude, and I guess I got my answer with that leaf. I'm guessing she didn't see anything... intimate, though. Inuyasha would have smelled that. And, hmm... You're line with her miko powers hurting Inuyasha (well, more like having the potential too) gave me an angsty thought about miko and youkai/hanyou relationships. o_o It's a bit off-topic, though. LOL. So maybe I'll email it later. Great new chapter! I knew you'd be more creative than suddenly introducing an old character, and surprise us! 8D
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2009 19:21 CDT
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I was wondering how the romance was going to come in, and then when Kagome came out of her illusion I had an "Oh" moment. Nice! I like how you adapted that scene from the manga to the modern era. Now my question is what exactly she saw. Something innocent, or something slightly more intimate? I guess I'll have to wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: kitsunemagic1 On: October 29, 2009 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wouldn't mind having one of those leaves tapped onto MY forehead! Haha! Keep the story coming, it's great!
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2009 11:28 CDT
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Loved the chapter! I really think that what Kagome saw in her vision was a kiss between her and Inuyasha or her life beside him in the Sengoku Jidai after they destroy Naraku and the Shikon no Tama. Oh, well...Your story, your ideas...Love your stories!
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2009 09:17 CDT
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O___O You evil, evil, woman! HAH, I'm wondering if it's Shippo or something. XD Then again, he or Kouga wouldn't really feel wrong to Inuyasha... So either they've changed, or you're being creative and sending someone else out there. =) Nicely done, so far. I can't wait for more! Nothin' like a good old demon hunt on All Hallow's Eve!
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Reviewed By: greenl3unny On: October 29, 2009 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Excellent work, it's perfect for the Halloween season. It really put me in the trick-or-treat spirit.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 19:49 CDT
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Coincidentally my Halloween costume/Hall costume for an October Con was a kitsune and I went pretty much the same route. I did more restrained make-up and wore pointy ears but I had the kimono, the geta and the tail. I as absurdly pleased to see Kagome in the same get up. It's interesting to see how you are working this into canon while developing the characters. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 15:04 CDT
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Lovely lovely! I can't wait until the next chapter. I'm crossing my fingers for at least a kiss between Inu/Kags. (And hey, if there's more I will be infinitely pleased. But I will be more than happy with a little kiss.) Let me know if you need a beta to help you out. You've been helping me, so I am more than happy to help you as well. :-)
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