| "Hesitation" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: O.o
Reviewed By: YouKnowWho On: November 03, 2009 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really drwn into thism there were a few spelling issues like "u" instead of "you" and that kind of thing, and it has the enjoyable beginings as all great novels and stories. cant wait to see the twists and climax
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Reviewed By: Keh... On: November 03, 2009 14:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Holding your story hostage until people review? Must not be work reading then. Take more pride in your work, or don't post at all.
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 09:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome start don't quit now. This has the beginnings of a very good story
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