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| "Pride, Before the Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2009 02:03 CST
Comment/Review:
i didnt read the authors notes the first time through, so i had no idea what was going on... and really... a reader shouldnt have to read the authors notes to know whats going on, im just saying... and you didnt say sesshoumarus name until half way through... so i didnt know who "he" was until that chapter, and before you said sesshoumaru, you said hojo, which made it even more confusing... it sounded like a good idea, a really angsty tear jerker... but i read it in ten minutes or less... twice... so... good idea, poorly executed...
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice kinda sad story... really liked it though... good job... great work!
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