| "Human Realm" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2009 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting story... really liked it... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2009 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great final chapter. Overall, a wonderful little story. I hope to see more from you in the future.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2009 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better. I understand you're near the end, and I think I agree...this isn't the type of fic that should just be drawn out forever and ever for no reason...but less is more, ne? Short and sweet, in it's own demented way. I am totally loving that Inuyasha went and mated her without realizing it. It's like he suffered from the demonic version of getting drunk and married in Vegas, LOL. And adding that bit about the children was a smart plot twist, otherwise, one could argue that Kagome had thought it was just some kind of barbaric fling and that she wouldn't really want to be stuck with him forever. Now we all know that won't be the case, and I for one am really looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: My thoughts
Reviewed By: Not4use [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2009 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Due to the fact that my grammar sucks I gave you a 10 haha. I'm automatically assuming your grammatically correct! =D Your writing is very inresting and you seem to have no problem keeping the plot flowing from the first three chapters I've read. What I really like is the individual emphisis you put on there personalitys! Its enjoying to read how your male charcter is Irate about everything!.. It makes you wonder what hes really capable of...then again he is a demon! =P Hope to see you keep writing! -Sonja
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2009 16:32 CST
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lol i like this a lot update soon
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2009 03:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
InuYasha has a potty mouth... Great story!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good second chapter. If he accidentally killed Kagome in his bloodlust that would kind of ruin any plans you had for continuing this further, so I'm guessing she's going to be all right. She's probably just still asleep because she's worn the fuck out, pun intended. Besides, those clues about him being sore and his back hurting has me thinking that's not even Kagome's blood at all, which then begs the saucy question...Kagome, what's gotten into you? You definitely left a few gaps here that I know will be resolved in the third chapter when you reveal what really happened. I wonder if Inuyasha will realize how deeply he actually cares for "the Bitch"...what with the way he went running back into the bedroom calling her name like that. I'm loving the idea of Inuyasha actually being a real, bonafide, evil demon, who still manages to fall for Kagome despite himself, LOL. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kristi N On: November 11, 2009 22:14 CST
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Your story is kinda like a more modern version of "The Arabian Nights." It's pretty cool. I can't wait to see what happened to Kagome. Just as a side note, your second chapter is posted above the first, so it is a little confusing at first. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like this! Pretty amusing and I like your writing style. The POV is great!
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