"Artless" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Hinata28h [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2010 09:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love it,love it,love it! I love how you captured Ino and Deidara's personalities! I can't wait for more chapters! They're awesome!
| Reviewed By: TJD41066 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2009 12:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This story was very interesting. I loved the way you were able to stay in character of Ino and Deidara. Only a few grammar and spelling mistakes were noticeable. your details were perfect and choice of words kept my interist. So far so good. Can't wait to read more from you. ~Tabitha~
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