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Title: "YOU! SUCK ME!"
Reviewed By: Kiroku Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks you for Inuyasha's blunt and unexpected line of "YOU! SUCK ME!". I can't breathe. That was hilarious! I felt like the demoness at that moment! Thank God I was drinking water instead of OJ... Uh, "peak?" A fucking hilarious piece. I'm headed off to read the sequel to it! ~Kiroku~
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Reviewed By: angel] On: November 25, 2009 06:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHA when Inuyasha said 'suck me!' i couldnt help but burst into laughter XD but OMG *slams hands down on the table* i wanna read Sesshoumaru!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: I would LOVE YOU forever if you wrote the third part.
Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2009 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was FANTASTIC!!! Please Write the part three!! i Would Love to read about Sesshoumaru!
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2009 07:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah! Do the Sesshoumaru part! Do the Sesshoumaru part!!! I'm wiated to see if you're going to make the InuxKag part and thanks for doing it. ^^
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Title: 3rd part yes
Reviewed By: geega [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2009 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. You must make a third part. maybe hookup Sesshoumaru with Kagura.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2009 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh holy shit! LMFAO! That was hilarious and fucking hot. You rock! Thanks for putting in my line, but I loved what you did. "YOU!" "Suck me!" I was like WTF?? It was a good thing I wasn't drinking anything! I probably would've done a couple of things differently, but only because there are so many different ways that this storyline could have gone, and I absolutely love the way you decided to do everything. If faced with this type of plot I probably would've had Kagome wanting Inuyasha to help the demoness, for one thing, but I think the way you had her irrationally jealous was much better, especially after she realized she was being irrationally jealous, and what she decided to do about it! I also loved how Inuyasha's own jealousy mixed with stubbornness had him practically demanding the youkai's attention for a second there, instead of him eventually submitting in nervous humiliation as my version probably would've directed things. And if you do decide to do a second chapter with Sesshoumaru, well...I will just make sure in advance that I have no beverages anywhere in sight! You sure do love to torture Sesshoumaru, not that I mind in the slightest.
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