Reviewed By:JaJemalory97 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 10:57 CDT Comment/Review: Nice cliffie. I found this story hard to read because it was all written in one paragraph. But your ideas are really original. The thing I found in this story is that it lacked much detail. It was kind of rushed up at the end. Update soon, would like to see what the witch's son looks like.