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"I'll Take Away Your Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]

Reviewed By: Kori-Volf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2012 01:33 EDT
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Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10

Comment/Review:
XD amazing, just....amazing. :3 definitely an enticing read, since there are not a lot of AangxKatara fanfics, I've seen D: your story is quite accurate in some points, like the oil and stuff.. and the humor is positively amusing. You could use some minor word changes though in some sections, and maybe improve on sex realism? ;3 first times are not that hot, still other than some word choices, it was a very awesome read.

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