|
| "Happy Ending" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Reviewed By: Mamosere On: May 27, 2012 02:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is quite sweet. I enjoyed reading this, you are really good at capturing your characters emotion at any given situation, you are one superb writer truly one of my favorite. Thank you for such a great story. Loved it. | Title: inugirl2003
Reviewed By: inugirl2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2011 08:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Title: inugirl2003 Reviewed By: inugirl2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2011 08:27 EDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I accidently put this review on another author, but it was meant for you...not sure how I got on that other author's page haha. Anyway, here is what I wrote: You are honestly one of my favorite authors...can't think of anyone else that tops you at this time:)...you are funny, romantic, clever, you can believe the characters-the characters are IN character, I could go on and on. Your are truely a wonderful writer! I ALWAYS look forward to reading your work. Please keep going:) I absolutely love you! | Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2010 18:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice one... liked it... good job... great work! | Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2010 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very nice. It was a nice change of pace to have Inuyasha be so unfamiliar with sex. That is something that we tend to overlook sometimes, when would he have had a chance to experiment. But you conveyed it beautifully, and as usual I loved how you showed what he and Kagome were thinking and feeling. And it was nice to see that he can suffer from human ailments like cramps and torn muscles if he isn't given enough time to heal. Though you do seem to have a trend for writing stories that occur during the new moon, each is always different enough that they are all very enjoyable. Great job.
| Reviewed By: RosieB [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2010 18:34 EST
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Romance: Inuyasha/Kagome for the Fourth Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join the group yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! -- RosieB
| Title: where's Kaogme's happy ending?!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2010 06:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was very nice, and had a lot more fluffy googy romance involved then the title leads one to believe. I loved that of course. I hope you'll have time to write something again soon.
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 14:35 EST
Comment/Review:
What a sweet story, so well written it was a pure joy to read.
| Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 01:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I could have swear that i've left a review!!! OMG!!! I just LOVED you're fic sooooo much when I read it, I was actually looking for it in my favorites and I found it and was soooooo happy to read it again xD I LOVE this fic, it's so sweet, so romantic, and very realistic, and i DO LOVE as a crazy when Inuyaha is innocent and stuff, but this was more like TRULY innocent and i just LOVED it!!! every bit of you're fic xD it's just so perfect, so wonderful, the only thing it's that kikyo doesn't die or anything (sorry i DO hate kikyo xD) but in the way the fic it's it's just as perfect as it is right now xD you fic RULE!!! really... I really love it xD thank you for sharing it with us xD hey good luck and have a great day xD take care byebye xD
| Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 20:38 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh so sweet and smutty. I think you should write one more chapter. For me? Please!
| Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 17:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so this is your "Leg massage turns into 'leg' massage" story. I really like the premise, that a battle could push Inuyasha so much that although he's not wounded, he really feels it afterwards. He's much tougher than a normal human, but he's still part human, so it makes sense that "normal" human ailments like sore muscles would affect him. Very original idea though. Love his amazement at Kagome drinking from the same water bottle, and his subsequent reflections about the little things she did to show her acceptance. Oh, poor Hojo, LOL! He unwittingly gives Kagome the idea that moves her and Inuyasha a lot closer. "She…she would be willing to touch me…just to make me feel better?" That's a powerful line, and I can see why he's so astounded. I love how you portray touch as such so important in this story. And that his desire to have her continue to touch him (plus the moonless night) helped him overcome his natural inhibitions. And I completely understand his *ahem* physical reaction to the massage ;-) LOL-ed at him mentally yelling at his cock. Telling it to go away doesn't work; it has a mind of its own! LOL-ed again at "She could see his point." Stop doing that! This is a serious story! XD I could see Kagome asking if it was her too, since like you said, not knowing would suck something awful. I'm glad they didn't have sex; what you did was much better. The ending was incredibly beautiful, and the last line was a perfect conclusion to the story. Another fine story. Keep cranking them out! I get excited every time I see an alert in my inbox.
| Title: A nice change
Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this one shot. I think it's refreshing to see Inuyasha reacting like an individual who is new to touching in such a way. I did snicker a few times at how verbal he was. Definitely enjoyed this, and how realistic it was. Way to go! The Goddess does it again! You've always got hits :)
| Title: A nice change
Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this one shot. I think it's refreshing to see Inuyasha reacting like an individual who is new to touching in such a way. I did snicker a few times at how verbal he was. Definitely enjoyed this, and how realistic it was. Way to go! The Goddess does it again! You've always got hits :)
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2009 19:46 EST
Comment/Review:
Ah....sweet sigh.
|
|
|
