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| "De-flour-ed" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: bethany [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was soooo good I just can't stop grinning and laughing about it poor Ed lol
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 07:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great spring kink darlin' :)
| Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 01:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh wow...I must say, I have a hard time imagining Ed doing something so forward. I usually don't read non-Inuyasha stuff, but I figured since it was you it would probably be well worth it. And it most certainly was. I wonder if Al was in on the whole thing, or he just accidentally wanted to get out of chopping wood? I hope the actual manga gives them the chance to have such an ending, and doesn't kill off too many main characters.
| Title: Apple Pie is awesome!
Reviewed By: Guardian Angel of ALL Anime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
“Had trouble keeping your trousers on today, eh, Ed?†LOL. My goodness, this fanfic was a hot, delicious morsel indeed. I had this big, ole' grin on my face the whole time when I was reading this, I love humor. You definitely need to make more stories like this!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boo! Hahaha, bet you didn't expect to see me here. You should feel honored, because I never waste my time with non-Inuyasha fanfiction. When I saw it was you, however, I just knew I had to make an exception. I never would've found this fic in the first place if I didn't have you tagged as a Favorite. Since I'm familiar with FMA I decided to give it a whirl, and let me tell you, I'm so glad I did! This was really well done. I haven't read any other FMA fics, so I don't really have any basis for comparison, but I have read all of your other fics (aside from that other non-Inuyasha one, because I'm not familiar with that story) and this reads just like any of your other masterpieces. Keep up the good work!
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