| "The Night After" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2009 03:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Amazing. Very well-written. That´s the best fic about Bulma and Vegeta´s interaction soon after Buu (well, maybe along with Sholio´s Fireflies). And quite convincing, too. You made Vegeta cry and yet looking very In Character. I want to see more fics from you! :)
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Reviewed By: xaverri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Definitely one of the best one shots I've read in a long while. You captured their emotions perfectly and I can't wait to see your 3-year version! You really read the manga thoroughly and held on to every bit of information you could get from Akira ^.^ Very accurate, very enjoyable. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Kittenbrower [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. Vegeta would be more open to his emmotions after the Buu saga. And we do have hints about it. When Buu appears to everyone at the end Bulma is holding him, more importantly he is letting her. He is also drawn softer in the party episode. So he does admit his feelings, if only briefly.
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