| "Broken Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: stephaey On: March 14, 2010 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just Amazing. I am speechless. A truly touching story, I loved it. Loved it, loved it! Inspiring.
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly touching and very profound. This story has a stunning way of pulling you in and making you never want to escape (I know I felt it) Thank you for sharing :)
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Title: Congratualtions!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Fanguild On: February 23, 2010 11:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Darkfic and Best Drama for the Fourth Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join the group yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! ~ Lyiint
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a well thought out story and it stayed close to the characterization of the characters. :) I liked it a lot!
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Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2010 02:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To put it simply: that was Awsome. It is wonderfully written. The plot fabulous. I can't properly articulate everything that is wonderful about this story. I loved it, it's going into my favorites folders.
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Reviewed By: MidniteShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww, sweet ending :) Inuyasha couldn't be broken forever, I knew it.
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Title: ABSOLUTLEY WONDERFUL!!!
Reviewed By: aprildiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should be very proud of yourself, this is a fantastic story, one of the best Inuyasha characterations and very original heart breaking, heart warming stories ever. Thank you for sharing, please write more stories!!!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2009 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the rating says it all.
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Reviewed By: kathleen collim On: December 11, 2009 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great story im glad that inuyashas brother did the right thing and he stayed in character by being honorable and it happy ending
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a beautifully written story, I love how you have kept everyone in character as originally written. Thank you for a great story.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 03:31 CST
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When I started reading this story I was expecting something along the lines of the typical slave story, but this turned out to be a touching, beautiful piece. You brought out the characters well, and expressed the trauma that Inuyasha had been through very skillfully. It wasn't taken too lightly, but the piece didn't drown in it either. Great job on this wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow... There's really no words I could use to properly describe this. It is just so incredibly profound, a truly magnificent tale. I've seen the "Inuyasha gets captured and broken" scenario done before, but never so accurately, in keeping with the canon in regard to their personalities. If I had to nitpick one little thing, I must confess that your particular style of incorporating the characters' thoughts into the standard text of a paragraph occasionally made it take a moment to discern what was meant to be first-person thought rather than your own narrative, but look, I still gave you all 10's despite this. The story itself is truly, in a word, flawless.
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