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| "Freedom Lost With Our Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: interesting
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2009 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never thought that kiyone would have such a past. I guess I should go by the old saying of not judging a book by it's cover but it was enlighting to read about her love and reasoning behind her affiar with byakuya. It was also intersting to find out that byakuya resent hisana for the way the marriage ended. Though he still loves her, he is upset with her for leaving him. this was a nice beggining to what i saw transpire in dc. looking forward to more chapters. as always i love reading your fan fic
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2009 11:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes, Bastion. I took your suggestions and then used them for my own ends. Bwahaha! There's no escaping my power of suggestion! *rimshot* Anyway, very interesting oneshot on this happy couple. Man this one had disfunctional written over it from the get go. Kiyone is delusional period and in a way I can't find myself feeling bad for her. It obvious that she brought this loveless relationship upon herself and in an odd way that might be what it would take to keep her interested. Most of all I feel sorry for that kid cause you know he's going to look at the two of them and wonder "How did those two ever get together?". Finally, is it me or is there something in the water? ;)
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