| "Darkling Winter" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 14:34 CST
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Wow, I'm really beginning to believe they do bring out the worst in each other, but that certainly keeps the sparks flying between them. I like how he worried about her and made his feelings known, without coming right out and saying it. The way he'd kissed her too was perfect. I would have loved to have seen what happened when they finally acted on their feelings but I can understand how editing tends to chew things up lol Again, I loved this story and I appreciate that you took the time to write it. I hope to one day see more IY/Dh x-overs from you in the future, if you ever find a plot bunny that decides to nibble on you. Merry Christmas!
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Title: Chapter Three
Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 14:15 CST
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Sorry I didn't get a chance to review yesterday. Things have been hectic around here and now I'm playing catch up. I really liked this chapter, starting with Nick's appearance. He's always been one of the more amusing Squires and I greatly enjoy his sarcastic way of dealing with things. I also enjoyed Kagome's reaction to finding out her place had been destroyed. She was taking it far better than I would have and I'm thinking it's probably a very good thing that Talon had healed her, otherwise she probably would have been less forgiving lol Another excellent chapter, I'm off to read the next one.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay a kiss!! and ah man did you have to cut out the last chapter? i like smut.... pouting oh well hopefully you will write some more soon in another story or maybe put the *smut* up... snickering... great story...
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Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 02:52 CST
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It's very good. I find this crossover very interesting. This isn't the first one I've read. I'll be waiting for more. I liked the thought of Kagome throwing the stubborn Celt's boots at his head. Would love to hear the conversation he would have with Wulf after that little insident. Also wonder what Ash and Simi would have to say. It would be priceless that's for sure. Wonderful story and well written. Till later, Eluwei
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Reviewed By: Flame of the Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 00:27 CST
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I love it so far! But there seems to be a section from the first chapter thrown in for some reason. It's right after she calls him a Vampire. So I'd never heard of the series Talen is from but you have now made me want to go find it and buy it. I can't wait for you next update! Thanks so much for writing it and please keep up the good job!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 00:16 CST
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Okay, I have to say that this chapter lived up to everything I was hoping for and more. Kagome's irritation at Talon in her home was priceless and I was snickering with the mental image of Kagome throwing his boots at him. I also loved the idea of forcing him to have tea and enjoy it. Now to the cliffhanger you left *ponders* You've got me speculating on just what the heck happened. I'm almost wondering if Talon purposefully took her out there knowing the Spathi demon would follow. In which case, Kagome might well kill him when/if she finds out that she was bait. Assuming that was the case anyway lol Another riveting chapter, I'll be rereading and thinking the possibilities over all night now.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 00:05 CST
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you would updeate with a cliff hanger pouting.. that is not fair... snickering although it makes me eager for the next chapter... update again when you have the chance.i want to know who was behind the hoelgen light...
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2009 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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perfect.. you have me curious abouth his questioning... and talon is perfect.. you have him perfect.. update soon when you have a moment
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2009 08:38 CST
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Wonderful start to the story. Thank you again for writing it! I don't think you have anything to worry about for Talon's characterization; he's acting just as I would expect him to. Kagome's reaction to his method of confronting her was interesting and I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter to see how the interrogation goes. I do believe that she may have met her match ;)
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