| "Batteries Not Included" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2010 15:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I would have added a few more details and foreplay but it's very good.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2009 13:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Another great/sweet story from one of the very best writers around! Loved it.
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Reviewed By: little25victor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you sure it's just a one shot?????? LOL XD
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a minute there I was wondering how the title came into play, until I got to the very end, of course. Very clever! I wasn't expecting this story to tie in with that other one, but that certainly explains why Kagome wasn't in any type of pain. I really liked this piece. Very realistic. Well done!
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Title: Hi!!!
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!! OMG!!! what a great Christmas gift!!! this was sooooo kool!!! I mean Inuyasha was sooooo sweet!!! do innocent!!! I LOVED IT!!! I really do love it when Inuyasha is so innocent xD and everything as so sweet, and funny at the end xD jijijijiji I don't think anyone would ever need batteries with Inuyasha xD juajuajua well well Merry Christmas and happy new year xD and gooooooooood luck with everything, most of all for next year xD byebye
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Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for fic, short but sweet. ^_^
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