Reviewed By: TheMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2010 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I can't believe I'm the only one commenting on that story. D: Seriously, it need more review ! Well, I'm a fan of Twisted fantasy and I wanted to try another of your story and I gotta say I'm not dissapointed, not at all. Yori is just, awwwww. Okay, I love him ! Goldie's the best of course ! The story was so original, and "Kinda kinky". (Ha ha sorry I've gotta say it at least one time !) But one thing I got to say... Alana is such a emo bitch. Okay, I love Yori but Alana is soooo getting on my nerve. She always cry and just think about herself. She think she's not selfish but she's like the more selfish character of the story.^^" Anyway, it was fun to hate her, cause I was always trying to love her... for Yori, ha ha ! I think I've got to like her a bit but my gosh, Yori is so patient for a guy. Really ! *He's really great, hope to see him again* Anyway, I'll look your other fic, I really love your story and style ! Keep it up ! ^^ And a 'to be continue' would be amazing ! (I'll so read it !) And sorry, I'm french so well.. forget my mispelling. ^^"
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