| "Unexpected Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: MotherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2012 04:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!! Hope you can update soon! |
Reviewed By: momo101 On: March 27, 2010 13:32 EDT
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As always great writing. Very interesting concept. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2010 15:29 EST
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AHHH!!! No! Update! You can't just leave it at a cliff hanger!
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: January 20, 2010 15:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I'm hoping you'll update soon. Thanks!
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Title: XDDDDDD
Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 13:53 EST
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I am laughing! So hard! OMG that was the best! I can't picture Hiei as her brother either, but could hold in my amusement. But Hiei! That was an awesome closing line! Ahahahem. Hiei was so wonderful in gettting her to go out and making her enjoy it (the drink selection was a nice touch, and I love the rose in Kagome's hair--it really communicates how well he started out). I am starting to wonder why Kagome has no love interests though...Noriko's fault? This was a wonderful distraction from learning about Tory party organization in the late 1700s, seriously. XD Even if it means you're putting off BWM...^.-
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Reviewed By: SilvermistTaleweaver_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2010 05:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs, mops up desk.* *grin* Any other night he'd have had a fight on his arrogant hands ;) Absolutely loved his oh so subtle way of putting Noriko in her place. Looking forward to the rest!!!
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 07:21 EST
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update soon that last part about the fiance was hilarious and great can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Kuro Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 01:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy where you're taking this story! Especially with the ending of the second chapter. I burst out laughing and was desperately hoping a link for the third chapter would appear. I'm greatly looking forward to an update!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 00:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was intrigued by the first chapter (sadly my browser was pulling the 'I won't let you leave reviews' bit again) but this chapter... the ending made ME choke then burst out laughing. Can't wait to see what happens next. -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: December 28, 2009 03:38 EST
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I hope you plan to post more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 23:45 EST
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I love you! Best Christmas wishes and everything! Now on to the story so far, Thank you plot bunnies. this is wonderful. I was mildly offended at Keiko (being one of those girls that friends try to 'fix up') but you've suitably taught her somewhat of a lesson. Now get Hiei to kill Noriko and everything should be dandy. XD As always what little Hiei Kagome interaction we have is shaping up to be wonderfully amusing and endearing, I can't wait for the next chapter. But enjoy your Christmas first!
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Reviewed By: SilvermistTaleweaver_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 08:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Second Reveiw! Dang.. I missed out! Always exciting to see a new peice from you and I hope your holiday season goes wonderfully! I liked the story, forgot the tea rule when a door prettied Yusuke's nose, and very much enjoyed the whole. Happy holidays and into the new year to you and yours!
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Title: ch 1
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 04:57 EST
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hey there! Merry Christmas! Too bad you didn't get to finish it - I look forward to the next chapter! Ja!
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