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Reviewed By: Glily On: March 01, 2010 02:23 EST
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I love where this is going. Can you please update more frequently?
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! So I completely missed when 4 was posted, but what a mess (a very good, exciting mess!). Sesshomaru and Izayoi and SessPapa taking his mate away would explain a lot about why Sessh acts the way he does. And now with this Inu/Sessh confrontation I'm really eager to find out what'll happen next, and if Sesshomaru really is InuYasha's father! ~Amber :)
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2010 07:40 EST
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Great job! You've definitely added a spin off of the age old concept of alphas and betas. Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: February 01, 2010 20:41 EST
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I enjoy this very much. But let's see if I get this right: Sess used to want to mate Izayoi but somehow, because he didn't ask his father's permission first, Izayoi ended up carying the child of Sess' father, namely Inuyasha? Wow. That's some tangled web! And, ya know that part, when Kouga said he submitted to his father? Does that mean he has anal sex with his father? That would be disturbing, but any kind of clarification would be nice.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2010 18:48 EST
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lol. wow. no wonder he hates Inuyasha so much!!!! hopefully he doesnt do the same thing to Inu, as his father did to him! Keep it up! cant wait to find out what happens next
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Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: February 01, 2010 06:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had fun with that lemon in chapter two! *waggles brows* But I'm so confused. Is this a Sess/Kags thing? A 3-some in the making? And some parts of Chap. 4 have me confused, but that's what a good author does, ne? She keeps you guessing! Good work!
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Reviewed By: Dreamer664589 On: January 11, 2010 01:37 EST
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Good job!!!!! Keep up the great work! I was so happy to see that you updated this story it seems like it's going to be a truly great one. Keep up the amazing work and update soon
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling (nsi) On: January 10, 2010 18:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love the premise! It'll be interesting to see where this goes. I can't wait to see InuYasha's reaction and how they plan to fix their infertility problem. :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: __candycoated [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2010 03:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful. I hope there will be more
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Title: Inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2009 03:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jealous a bit, eh Sessy? Like where this is going just wonder what all InuYasha's going to do bout it. Until next install - update when ya can! ;)
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