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Reviewed By: moonlight2930 On: June 09, 2012 18:17 EDT
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becauze is damm funny! i could'nt stop laughing when Sessh(searched) found the mark and the all drama baby and mating is hilarious! |
Reviewed By: moonlight2930 On: June 09, 2012 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What?Sesshy is the father?uh.... you did it this time ,hope Inu is not gonna be so hard punished.I love this plot! |
Reviewed By: REDWOLF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT WRITE MORE PLEASE
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Title: Kagome don't let "daddy" do that to your man!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 22:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is weird I won't lie, but it is also strangely enjoyable. I'm not a fan of "inu-cest" as they call it, so that part was the weirdest and if it hadn't been preceded be a well thought out plot I would have backed out of the story and kept looking. As it stands now though I was hooked for the incident happened. I hope you haven't abandoned this fic, cause even though I'm weirded out I still would like to read until the end.
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Reviewed By: bethany [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2010 03:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I want more
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2010 18:51 EDT
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wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow. more please!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2010 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, except...why all the "brother" commentary again all of a sudden? I thought it was established that Inuyasha was actually his son? I mean, it makes sense that they would each tend to keep thinking about each other as being brothers since that's all they'd known for so long, so at first I just kept waiting for Sesshoumaru's thoughts to do that "my brother...I mean son" thing, but it never came. Or Inuyasha thinking about what Sesshoumaru had told him while he was transformed and wondering whether or not it was true, or accepting that it was true and being amazed. Something. Oh well, I'm sure it'll be brought up again. In the mean time I will just mentally filter this chapter as needed. I can't wait to see Kagome's face when she finds out.
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Reviewed By: bethany [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2010 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that you are going to write more to this story or make a sec. part to this story thanks and have a great day
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Reviewed By: dreamer1234567 On: May 11, 2010 11:20 EDT
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oh wow! Very interesting. Update soon please! cant wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: DisabledLlama On: May 11, 2010 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I get the feeling that when Sesshomaru and Kagome sleep together, she'll end up having his kid instead of Inuyasha's? That would be an awesome twist... /evil
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2010 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool update. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh snap! This is about to get a whole lot more interesting, not that it wasn't already! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2010 14:39 EDT
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I Love it!Couldn't stop laughing at where Sesshomaru's moon is on Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2010 01:19 EDT
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OH MY GOD!!!!! Update soon please! I wonder how Inu wull take this, and if Sessh will start acting a little nicer now that he knows hes his son!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 02:32 EST
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OH MY GOD! i didnt even PICK UP ON the whole Inu = Sessho's kid thing! OH MY GOD! Please update soon, that chapter wasnt nearly enough to satisfy my need to know more!!!! :) Keep up the good work!
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